uh.......not to be entirely rude but......It's the worst poem i've read...........yeah........ exclamation marks shouldn't be used......the capitals need to go........and all the dots.......and the numbers........and the dots.......you miss use all of them. poetry is a gift. not everyone is good. try righting a story if your stuck on writing. but yeah........there is no hope for this poem...... this is the only poem that I'd give a 0.
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