Is this essay decent?

Wow, your essay is all over the place. Try to keep one idea in each paragraph and say what you have to say just once in each paragraph. Your essay makes it sound as though you have absolutely no clue what you want to do, which is ok, but the college wants you to sound like you have a better plan. The Techie courses do not fit with your ultimate goal unless it is a way to work and have enough money to attend the university. Make sure that your goal is clear. Even if you have no idea what you want to do with a degree in psychology, you should at least check out a few professions on the net and suggest a couple that you might be interested in. Good Luck!